Congratulations to Brendan J. of D Block for his amazing "Snowimagination" Post! His vivid details really helped his descriptive writing come alive! He definitely "showed" us what his blizzard experience would be like, rather than simply telling us. It's quite obvious that he proofread as well, considering his slim to none grammar/spelling errors!
Way to go Brendan!
"It was a quiet, peaceful night. I lay down, restless in my bed, tossing
and turning. I managed to crawl out just enough to see the enormous
cumulonimbus clouds over the horizon line, rolling into Gloucester. It
was like watching a horror movie, the eerie silence before an epic
battle was to commence. Just the thought of it sent chills cascading
down my spine, so I decided to retreat to my warm, cozy bed, and I slept
through the rest of the night. When I awoke, the clock did not show
time, which could only mean that the power had gone out. I rushed
downstairs to a blazing wood fire that illuminated the room. My sister
told me that the power had indeed gone out over the night which was
caused by a freak snow storm. The snow had completely barricaded the
door so no one could enter in or out. My sister and I made hot cocoa
and watched from the skylight, the snowflakes drop one by one. I studied
the individual pattern of each snowflake as it landed softly on the
window. If only there was a way to reach the outer world and play in the
soft, fluffy snow. Wait! The idea hit me like a brick in the head. We
made our way to the garage and grabbed two large shovels. I opened the
door and the entire doorway was covered in heavily compacted snow,
preventing us from seeing outside. Slowly, we chipped away at the snow,
creating a large hole for us to pass through. I wiggled into my snow
attire and ran outside to jump in the snow. My sister and I made snow
angels, had a snowball fight with our neighbors, and even made a large
mountain of snow to sled down. After we had done our share of playing,
our mother told us to carry in the christmas tree and we would decorate
it. The tree consisted of beautiful white lights, many different colored
bulbs, and family made ornaments. When we finished, we had a filling
chinese food dinner and then my siblings and I all went off to our
rooms, remembering the wonderful day we had together.
Many people think that the world is going to end very soon. Personally, I do not believe the rumor and never intend to in the future. However, if the world does infact end, I hope to spend every last minute of it with my family, and my friends, all the people that I love."
Many people think that the world is going to end very soon. Personally, I do not believe the rumor and never intend to in the future. However, if the world does infact end, I hope to spend every last minute of it with my family, and my friends, all the people that I love."
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